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Mercy by ~4zero4error:icon4zero4error:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Experimental > Other


"Mercy!"
He screams
"Let me live!"
Down on his knees
"I don't want to die"
The man standing above is silent
The sun on his face
His sword lashes out
Cleaving through flesh
"Mercy? Hah!"
Silence
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Submitted: July 13, 2007
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I'm not terribly proud of this one, it was mostly because I think samurai are cool and wanted to get a scene where a samurai was executing someone, and the other part was at the time I wrote it, I thought it would be cool to have each line have a set number of words, in this case, 1,2,3,4,5,6,5,4,3,2,1.
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~stratkat:iconstratkat: Jul 13, 2007, 7:05:14 PM
Nice, a little to short though, it could easily be expanded on, but for what it is it's okay.

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~hideouslyscarredange:iconhideouslyscarredange: Jul 14, 2007, 11:19:41 AM
This is good. I liked it alot! Keep up the good work!

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