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A lover's kiss,
Filled with passion and
Bliss
My mind is afire
Filled with ecstasy
Higher
Than any believed
Could ever be had.
Why is it,
Now,
It makes me so sad?
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This one I started to write to convey the warmth and passion of a loved one's kiss. It completely got away from me, and the last few lines almost completely wrote themselves without my permission. I guess its a statement of how I am feeling, and past experiences.
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~grifan526:icongrifan526: Jul 17, 2007, 12:11:56 PM
I like it how it seems so happy and blissful then all of a sudden it pulls a U-ey. Very original style interesting and good. Great job

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